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Friday, August 4, 2017

Hurry Up Tim! narrative story By: Eleanor Hughes.

Hurry Up Tim By: Eleanor Hughes

W.A.L.T: find the seven elements that make up this narrative story

Elements                                                                                 Examples from the narrative.
Setting
At the school cross country course,  just past.
Chartiors
Tim, Mrs Benson, the other kids.
Sequence
  • Hiding in the toilets.
  • Tim starts running and gets a bad stitch.
  • Tim falls over and skids across the gravel.  
  • Tim trips up on the rubbish bags.
  • Tim cheats and skips a bit then runs through the park.
  • The lady from the top of the window catches him cheating.
  • His teacher thinks he came 3rd in the cross country.  
  • Tim has to go to the inter-school cross country.
Exposition
Tim has always made an excuse to not do cross country
Conflict
He decided to cheat by running through the park as a shortcut.
Climax
He gets a stitch, the falls on the gravels the trips over the rubbish bags which makes him behind everyone else so he cheats to get ahead.
Resolution
Since he  cheated the teacher thinks he was one of the people to make it through to the inter-school cross country.


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